“On a plane . . . on a plain . . . “
stories for boys
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Light drifts, filtered through the window, it’s early evening and the sun is setting on the other side of the building. Soon, someone will turn on an interior light so they can continue to see the cards. For now, the room, the lighting, is how I like it — dusky. You can’t quite make out [...]
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There is so much I want to show you. Not tell. Show. That’s what they teach you about writing, right? Show, don’t tell. But I’m the narrator. I’m telling you about a time in my past. All I can do is tell you. The catch here is how well I illustrate the entire time. I [...]
